Where would go with this short story opening?

I think you need to clear up "bike" with "motorcycle" I got confused there. I would change roaring aeroplane with "fighter jet" since you are using a military back drop. "She" is a soldier, he is in a relationship with her. Females make great terrorist because men never expect them to do it, that is why they are good at it. I like her for a soldier. Her father is in some kind of command position in the military. The people who shot at your guy work for her father and betrayed him. The guy is having a relationship with her, and was going to marry her, but he thinks her father tried to shoot him since the bullets that shot him came from her fathers gun. This causes drama with them because it was her fathers gun, but someone else fired it.